‘amnesia’ [2]…. Comments

Amresia is seen here from another angle in a short and firm manner.

it is sad when one want desperately to remember love, and past life and can't. this seems real.

I am really enjoying these perspectives on Amnesia, this one made me want to challenge our minds authority to dictate our memories. I have been taught that it is within our own capabilities to direct our mind towards more positive thoughts, when those we want to escape from, seem to dominate our existence. We have to let them in and then allow them to sail through and away, clearing the path to allow our minds own strength to take us where we really want to be going. It takes practice and then becomes natural, so that, no matter what the situation you find yourself in, you can think your way through it and out of harms way, if that is the case of course. I believe we create our own futures by the thoughts we think in the now! That is why it is essential to break the chains that our minds try to bind us to misery in. I often astound myself at how easily I forget bad things in my life, but we have to, or life would be unbearable, there are many many more good things to consider. Smiling at you Tai

Is Memory the legal lethal luggage? Readers’ reaction please.. Let us be illegal to enjoy Amnesia. Wow! Ten+++ WR

wow! ! BBYE memory (ha ha ha) there is this hindi word for captivating text 'dhara-pravh'(if there is English word for it I dont remember it now!) Never seen Amnesia this way! lovely poem once again...

I like your style of writing and the expressions were interesting, but I think you got a little carried away with the flow during the middle portion.. fortunately, you recovered well..

excellence in providing the reader with your thoughts 10

O memory Go into coma, deep coma Never come alive in me I salute you Au Revoir There are sort of sad memories I would like to bury, dig them oneday and perceive them with no aches.... wonderful poem , , , voted 10

high technical language has been used here.voted 10 surya

A wonderful piece from you.

Your style and structure of poetry is quite unique...though nice rhymes and fine diction as well...truly an esspeecee...Thanks! ! !

Words express that lost touch of feelings

haha a good way to manage with bad memory

oh! ! ! ! i wana forget so many things.. i mean even if the memories are sweet, even they finish it with some bitterness.. this is a nice one indeed! ! ! ! , sort of an amusing read.....10 with love shan

I like the idea of leave me alone, and not only that but go to the bottom of the Pacific. You want the memory to go but also the person, there's sadness in there but also a sort of bitter humour, there's a little bite to it. :)

Lovely and amazing write with memory. Love this 10+++

I like this kind of poetry. I tried a couple of times, like in my poems DROWNING, MY QUESTIONS, LOVE AND LOVER. This kind of abstract poetry, I feel, needs a exposition of indepth feelings more effectively and efficiently. Kudos