Friday, November 7, 2008

Ammira Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ammira my princess
For my heart goddess
God in you put his might
Upon you pours his light
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Kassem Oude
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Mimi Fakhira 12 December 2008

An amazing piece of art. A 10 from me too!

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Incredably intmate and overflowing with focused passion. Good write. 10/10

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Wonderful tribute to love.A ten from me.Please read my poems when you get a chance.Thank you.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 14 November 2008

Good imagery; nicely woven words and fine structure make this poem really lovely.................my heartfelt 10

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 07 November 2008

i love the words knitted to form a sweet rhyme........Amirra will love this! ! !

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