Friday, May 8, 2009

Ammanian Girls Comments

Rating: 5.0

In their name
I would write
I have but one heart
Yet here each young girl
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Afzal Shauq
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Winnie Angel 21 June 2009

Is this every man's feeling? ...quite unstable....

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a well done poem and cute one..better for you to avoid young girls...

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Carol Gall 14 May 2009

good poem sometimes i wish they were longer

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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 May 2009

My 10 for this short and cute piece.

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Afzal Shauq

Afzal Shauq

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