She rose into our world
Before the mighty sun peeped into the world
Nick – Knack sounds in the kitchen
Made us up and fold the linen.
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Tears came to my eyes reading this. When my mother passed away for a long time 'she' was all I wrote about. It eases the pain and the regrets of 'could have beens' and 'should have dones'. Your love for your mother echoes in this poem the same way I feel for mine. Lovely poem. Thanks. Deva
My father made me read this poem and I am glad he did. It is a beautiful poem, full of love and compassion.
Dear Kolitha, Very powerful, I almost went back to my childhood. We both had mothers but they must be poles aprt in some things but very similar in affection and care. I stil remember the way she left, poor me I couldn't even pay my last respects. So thank you for deidcating this poem to my mother too. I want to write more but unable to do it now. Thanks again for bringing back memories of my mother. Regards, Ranjith
Well expressed.You've expressed your feelings superbly.You've portrayed your love towards your mother so nicely.My heart attached to your flow write.Indeed it's a wonderful poem.10++++