Wednesday, September 17, 2014

Amidst The Stones © Comments

Rating: 5.0

The railway tracks gleam silver black,
for miles along its lonely way;
Thundering onslaught in attack,
scattering stones in disarray.
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Roann Mendriq
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Bipasha D 09 July 2018

Wonderful sonnet. The couplet beautifully summarizes the theme.10

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Fiona Davidson 17 September 2014

great writing, I enjoyed the phrasing very much and final couplet really summed it up.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 17 September 2014

How strange and good that beauty thrives, Amidst life troubles, hope survives. so beautiful dear..thank you

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