Friday, July 24, 2020

Amidst The Puddle Of Pain Comments

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Amidst the puddle of pain
Battling to rise to the surface in vain
When pulled into the abyss of nothingness
And you are on the verge of abandoning life
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Edward Kofi Louis 26 July 2020

In pain! ! To gain the truth! Again and again with righteous morals! ! Able to train the mind. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Varsha M 26 July 2020

Even pain pours like running water when your pen desires to express. Lovely write.

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Rajnish Manga 24 July 2020

Very well articulated. Life is full of challenges. When surmounted, they bring joy and relief, but when they happen to be too big to win over, they could break one's will to live. This is where he needs all the emotional, psychological, moral and spiritual support to subdue his pain and come out of it like a winner. But is it that easy. Decision at the terminal moment makes all the difference when 'Allah is closest to you then jugular vein'. Quite an inspiring write. Thanks.

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 July 2020

Allah is closest to you then jugular vein......great faith; yes, I think so

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