Thursday, September 24, 2009

# Amidst..... Comments

Rating: 3.4

sitting amidst thorny bushes
with not a tree or leaf around
where from comes this lovely breeze
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Ramin Chaman 07 October 2009

A nice poem...too But I sit amidst a patch of wheat..

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C. P. Sharma 03 October 2009

Sam, You can hear the eternal gong, So, now you sing the divine songs. CP

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Joseph Poewhit 03 October 2009

I'm with you on the sanity part

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Sandra Fowler 01 October 2009

Poetry is a treasure. Your struggle is not in vain for you are an excellent wordsmith. May the music never end.10/10. Warm wishes, Sandra

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Sarwar Chowdhury 30 September 2009

the way you thought, it shows you are endowed with wisdom dear friend! 10+

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 30 September 2009

a powerful representaion.10 shan

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Deepti Agarwal 30 September 2009

beautiful representation of your poetic thoughts... good.. :)

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Raj Arumugam 29 September 2009

a lovely insight into our poetic moments

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Kesav Easwaran 28 September 2009

great poetic effort...thanks

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Bob Blackwell 28 September 2009

There is always beauty in our world, what you have written is so true, for beauty has to be inside of us to be seen. Bob 10

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Beautifully expressed. Poetry can create word pictures where we can expand your thoughts and feelings to find happiness within. 10 love Karin

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Surya . 26 September 2009

really a touching poem voted10 surya

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Meggie Gultiano 26 September 2009

All i can say is write on..keep on penning amidst all trials you are going to face. Thanks for everything too, for sharing your thoughts with me, my friend.

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~ Jon London ~ 25 September 2009

There's truth to this piece my brother...poetry is saving lives....It saved mine that's for sure....with my faith and understanding......the very thing I failed to realise before I picked up a pen...................wonderful job bro

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Catrina Heart 25 September 2009

poetry makes you focus and strong, tragedies inspire us to write......a leeway or fine fruitful passage to burst and survive...10+++

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Sandra Martyres 24 September 2009

Very true Samanyan....poetry is often like manna from heaven andd poetic expression defintinely a great panacea

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Miriam Maia Padua 24 September 2009

so true.. inspiring.. in poetry we can keep on dreaming.. making things easy expressing ourselves..through poetry.. poetry can make life bearable..amidst problems can make our heart smile amidst heartaches wonderful write as always, San... Something to ponder..and love poetry more than ever 10+++ Lovelots, Maia

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Louis Rams 24 September 2009

THIS ONE IS VERRRRRRRY GOOD. IT WILL OPEN UP THE MINDS OF THE READERS. A TEN

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Maitreyee Joshi 24 September 2009

looks like poetry is an oasis for u samanyan, is it not?

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Carol Gall 24 September 2009

good for you that you can write it out 10

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