sitting amidst thorny bushes
with not a tree or leaf around
where from comes this lovely breeze
...
Read full text
Sam, You can hear the eternal gong, So, now you sing the divine songs. CP
Poetry is a treasure. Your struggle is not in vain for you are an excellent wordsmith. May the music never end.10/10. Warm wishes, Sandra
the way you thought, it shows you are endowed with wisdom dear friend! 10+
beautiful representation of your poetic thoughts... good.. :)
There is always beauty in our world, what you have written is so true, for beauty has to be inside of us to be seen. Bob 10
Beautifully expressed. Poetry can create word pictures where we can expand your thoughts and feelings to find happiness within. 10 love Karin
All i can say is write on..keep on penning amidst all trials you are going to face. Thanks for everything too, for sharing your thoughts with me, my friend.
There's truth to this piece my brother...poetry is saving lives....It saved mine that's for sure....with my faith and understanding......the very thing I failed to realise before I picked up a pen...................wonderful job bro
poetry makes you focus and strong, tragedies inspire us to write......a leeway or fine fruitful passage to burst and survive...10+++
Very true Samanyan....poetry is often like manna from heaven andd poetic expression defintinely a great panacea
so true.. inspiring.. in poetry we can keep on dreaming.. making things easy expressing ourselves..through poetry.. poetry can make life bearable..amidst problems can make our heart smile amidst heartaches wonderful write as always, San... Something to ponder..and love poetry more than ever 10+++ Lovelots, Maia
THIS ONE IS VERRRRRRRY GOOD. IT WILL OPEN UP THE MINDS OF THE READERS. A TEN
looks like poetry is an oasis for u samanyan, is it not?
A nice poem...too But I sit amidst a patch of wheat..