Sunday, March 19, 2006

Amid The Light Comments

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The secret dreads,
The bloodied heads
Buried deep beneath the garden
The way they bled,
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Michael Troy Buffo
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R H 20 March 2006

Powerful, provocative and a harsh reminder of the futility of war. Particularly liked the alliteration and assonance in the first stanza. The use of rhyme and rhythm created the perfect mood for this poem. Kind regards. Justine.

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Michael Troy Buffo

Michael Troy Buffo

Vallejo, California
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