Tuesday, August 8, 2006

Amid Dust And Salt Comments

Rating: 5.0

could I but touch you
as a thing in itself
separate from everything
ever touched or seen
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 08 August 2006

Eila...ThE SENSES OF YEN AND OFFER ARE EVER PRESENT IN THIS MOST AMOROUS PIECE...VIVID IMAGERY PAINTS THE BACKDROP TO YOUR MESSAGE OF ROMANTIC ENCOUNTER...LOVELY WORK, Eila ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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***** ********* 08 August 2006

Your love poems are full of longing Eila, I hope you find what you need soon. Gorgeously delicate work indeed. Off to Tai wander land now, good to read you again and congrats on getting your book together, you and Ulrike are an inspiration to be sure.

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