Wednesday, June 30, 2010

Amid A Summer Heat Comments

Rating: 5.0

Strolling through, I with you
Blooming, colorful meadows.
Anxious sweat in palms.
Each breath you give
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Marcus McKinley
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Edmund Calleja 27 November 2010

I love this poem with its delicate and romantic interlude.

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Crystal Bradley 09 August 2010

Beautiful, romantic, eloquent words.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 28 July 2010

======= I think Indian culture gives much value to feet…e.g. to god/goddess, seers sages…seniors we touch feet as salutation…well in olden days in China women used to wear iron shoe to keep feet small.. Indeed very sensuous part in case of women…here poetically nicely incorporated It is not needless to mention in whole world I think Indian women wear feet ornaments of myriad types what is perhaps matchless else where…indeed a great poetry… thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 PS in Poem Hunter I’ve read Romance Point [series] you can try n ==========

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 23 July 2010

Amid a summer heat...I love it. This poems is sweet with a delicate sensual feel. Great write.

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