American Villanelle Poem by Jordan St. Stier

American Villanelle



We are the home of the brave and/or land of the free
Land of red canyons and land of blue sky
But America is becoming an ideology

Although we are not what they wrote us to be
I would gladly fly the Old Glory high
We are the home of the brave and/or land of the free

We came because of indignity
Because of prejudice, wealth, love, security and pride
But America is becoming an ideology

This is the country that opened and held out the key
Or didn't, and offered an empty box with hardship inside
We are the home of the brave and/or land of the free

Land of Americans, between each shining sea
You have sheltered us, beared us, ignored us, feared us from every mountainside
But America is becoming an ideology

Can't you hear freedom ringing, my country, my country!
Ignore the bigots that mock us and to the truth, ramify!
Are we the home of the brave and the land of the free
Or have we become an ideology?

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this for the bulletin asking for poems regarding our nationalities, and I wanted to express myself. America is, America, and we are a country that can lift itself off of the ground and out of the mud, but it seems that we are stuck under an overly-nationalistic phase in which our viewpoint should be "America First" and all that nonsense about self-promotion. I love my country, but I cannot love the vain and greed-induced lummox that we must endure that leads my country. I cannot bear to see my country be suffered this indignity of having something who has no problem with destroying our environment, banning travel to-and-from certain countries in the Middle East whom we are not fully allied with, grossly lying and having behavior extremely unfit for a world leader, mocking heroes and insulting peoples' race, putting up a wall that would keep Illegal Immigrants for even setting foot in the United States, insulting other countries, getting rid of trade-deals and peace treaties, mauling healthcare, bragging about his wealth without provocation, etc etc etc. America, you are a country of opportunity, a country of freedom and prosperity, a country that is so much more than what people see, and I do not mean to be overly patriotic, because that is not my character, but my country is seriously disappointing me. It is failing me. If you want to be a great country, than live up to your ground promises of the life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness, because everyone is created equal and we should universally see that.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success