American Gothic Comments

Your styling is great, its different and thats why i like it, you're a poet my friend. Keep creating that voice Best wishes Jon

I like it alot. its very unique

Again, your style is unusual, and takes getting used to.

I am not familiar with all of these people and so cannot appreciate every thing that is said and I haven’t yet caught on to all the meanings intended: ex., a girl clever escape faith's power I will have to do more reading I see.

Hey, this it is a good one, i like the way how you wrote it and the use of those few words, you did a lot with them....great.....

This is a good one, i like your choice of words. Keep on writing!

very good writing. I like this poem alot.

very well done.keep it up.

...a different style of expression....I enjoyed it......10

Nice poem, I like the dark, melancholic synomyms used in this poem to describe the gothic subculture. Lovely.

Spare, elegant definations. A very informative write. Take care. Kind regards, Sandra

america is the world pal, but world not america, bosen idup disana, indonesia and liverpool england is my better place, please comment my latest poems oh me

i can feel a very poetic trail.. wonderful ahmad

Very interesting, thankyou for sharing your work with us! :)

Ahmad, thank you for asking me to read your words. I like the shortened style of this poem. I shall read more poems now...My best to you, Carol

I like this one, its a little strange but its good

I like this one, its a little strange but its good