Monday, June 18, 2012

American Dream Comments

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Once he was young, and strong.
Once he would dare anything, do anything.
Climb mountains, swim rivers, mighty rivers,
To find the American Dream.
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Juan Olivarez
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Valerie Dohren 03 July 2012

Great poem - guess the American dream is just as difficult to realize as all other dreams, but we need dreams to keep us alive. Wonderfully descrtive write and very poignant.

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Smoky Hoss 19 June 2012

Perhaps those who have the abundance of America, tring to keep others out, should be thrown into, and made to eat the dust of the chapparel. - When will justice prevail? - Awesome poem; powerful words.

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Heather Wilson 19 June 2012

A wonderful write, Oh, how that man lived, he used life to support his family and enjoy, a great poem.

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