Tuesday, March 31, 2009

American Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

I’d love to visit Montana and wander on the plains
And go camping in Yosemite and walk inside the rains
Catch a Greyhound bus, down the roads we’d dally
And make sure the driver stops in the middle of Monument Valley
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Wojja Fink
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Christopher Flynn 10 July 2009

A poem that shows the beauity of Americas best When you live here you sometimes forget How nice it is. Wonderful poem

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Omar Ibrahim 18 June 2009

stunning! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! awesome rhyming.....super poem by a super poet! ! ! ! !

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Subroto Chatterjee 27 April 2009

Now thats the eternal hitchhikers dream....and in your case, just the right amount of the Pathfinder....Useful tour guide too! ! Cheers. Subroto

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Stephen Stirk 14 April 2009

We share the same dream John. Went once in 1983 but unfortunately haven't been back. It's on the agenda though. A cracking write, which evoked personal memories Steve

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 11 April 2009

I too wandered with you in your dream My heart gave deep happiness scream.....Good Write...10+++

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 11 April 2009

it has a patriotic atmosphere and well penned the world wants the American Dream too my friend great tribute

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Teresa Dearing 04 April 2009

Tks for the tribute to our fair country. U did well for never having been here. don't forget to visit places like SD, Fl, MN, TX and my fav San Francisco and NapaValley. T

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Sathyanarayana M V S 03 April 2009

Lovely poem Wojja. I wish ur dream come true

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Sandra Fowler 31 March 2009

In your mind, you have been in America. Lovely write. And thank you for the kind compliment. Take care. Always your friend at poemhunter, Sandra

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 31 March 2009

I hope you do, your description so clear you could well have been. Makes me want to reach out for my hiking boots. Dream on....- Cindy

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