American Civil War Comments

you have the potential to be a good writer try to put more feelings into it to show the reader what you are really thinking and feeling by using the five sences

Your imagination paints detailed pictures. Keep writing.

No. I dont write stories, but war is a subject that is close to my heart.

Hi River, there were two Battles of Gettysburg so maybe one of them would define your title and topic better? I think you meant the cannon ball not the cannon went through the horse. With musket balls, a lot of the shoots would not be kill shoots to the heads although skulls is exciting. You choose a difficult theme which produces great expectations.

War.......A curse on Human Kind

this was sooo friffin good! ! its like a mini movie

A reminiscing poem.. Nicely described!

i like this one it reminds my of my good old days when i was a kid 10