Saturday, July 14, 2007

America Under The Boardwalk Comments

Rating: 5.0

The boardwalk quivers, carousel lights go out
Jesus in sand guarded by the devout
Summer crowds jostle by the ocean side
Kids scream for tickets to the carnival ride
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Frank Bana
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Frank - In your second stanza rice and life don't rhyme, you may want to rethink that. Otherwise, this was a very unique perspective on the changing personality of the American dream. Who are we, and where are we going? Thanks for this sobering peek from below! xxxCheryl

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