America, The Country Of Dreams Comments

'tis an excellent poem, , , yes, America, is the country of dreams, , , and all the innovative thoughts, you depicted wonderfully in this poem! ! ! top marks! ! ! ! my brother....

a good poem,10********* Rose)))))

contradiction personified....great! ! !

as i commented on hemingway poem we should always remeber the three most important lines: : : THE MENTAL THE SENTIMENTAL THE EXPERIMENTAL further more we are to cast light on very noticeable conflict twixt, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , the CREATIVE WORK and the ACADEMIC WORK and what other MAN can do[][]other MAN can do we should have our original ideas of..INVENTION and INNOVATION or we lose the CREATIVE part of the human being PHDAHMEDKHALED

Ahmed: my point of view on the writing of poems on the art of poetry - more appropriate and effective to write to the muse, to Calliope, herself (who, when found, often takes the form of a woman but is never the woman herself) . The poem, on the other hand, is two-fold. It is you, the writer of the poem and it is what you channel with the aid of the goddess, the muse. For a more distinguished statement and discussion of these and related concepts, vide Robert Graves, poems, lectures and essays.

very good message! great poem!

A great poem with your true emotion showing through. A great write.

Paris to US could be London is your next journey? hahahahaha joking :) The dream country should be your own country or a country where all peace and justice stay within...we cant use a country as a template to other countries, but we must assimilates all goodness in many countries to be one good country, a custom made country, fit your dream, as a dream country..._Unwritten Soul