America's Perspective Comments

Very well said, Dawn. Ron

I guess this is one of the most unique poem I have ever read and the way you have put your perspective sounded like I was listening to a beautiful rap song. Enjoyed reading your poem a lot.

OH what a poetry by the words, as i say simply wonderful as u verse, metaphors mach over the ground with their guns, still imagery recoils through the fumes of fire, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

An excellent composition of depth and wisdom! As I think of this Country's problems, and faults......and though we still have so much work....yet undone.....we stand alone......unique.....as a Nation.......without........peer!