America Politico Comments

yeah well you're real deep

very skillfully penned. good. shan

Outside neighbors look. Cesspool trucks arrive. Dirt cover-up off lid. Man preys lid open. Next years news escapes. CESSPOOL CLEAN and POLITICS AGAIN..yes it is everywhere adn it happens with arrival of politicians... but city gets clean face...so nice....10 read mine pora pora pora

its definitely a scratch that shall make lot of noise...........pls read my poem called ITS AMERICA YOU FOOL, its a satire with a viewpoint of an outsider

short but meaningful poem!

beautiful poem expressed the situation very well..

wonderfull poem. is revolutionary in spirit. voted 10 surya

Commendable work. Please take a look at my poem PROFESSIONALS

DEALS...that's it everywhere the same

Today, especially and most appropriately, thru God's protection, Mr. Obama will clean the house of time, wasted waste. Ten, here easily. God bless poets-all-MJG.

Very good poem - simplified poetry, well written and intellignet. Ibrar

It is an original way to poetry... Live and familiar drawing. 10// Tsira

Mirrors with lipstick kisses. In the small room - elbows bump. interesting lines. you are a very interesting poet. I like this. good job. *Purkey Girl*

Oh, wonderful imagination, you are able to put common into a good picture. Usually, the more common things are not easy to be fixed into a poem. You've successed.+10.

wow that makes you think its a very interesting poem i hope one day i will be able to write poems like this one that put pictures in your head

Great images here Joseph, very well written. Best wishes, Andrew

You created some interesting pictures here, Joseph. Quite creative. Best Wishes, Marilyn

love this poewhit. keep on.

I recommend it because of its creativity. There is not much here in poetry or even prose for that matter, but the creative elements do create a discussion more related to the issue than the poetry. That is a big plus. GW62