Sunday, May 10, 2009

America, Are You Happy Comments

Rating: 5.0

Gazing ahead I dare not ponder
The destructive significance of this situation
Tell me America, are you happy?
Or are you still entranced by rhetoric
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Tamra Craft 10 May 2009

incredibly well written and vastly agreeable. My favorite and most well put lines would have to be 'For the wise man knows that when many gather in one direction He should sprint the opposite way' So true. and rather than ring my political views too much into it by noting other favorites of mine, I will leave it at that! an enjoyably intelligent read.

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Tess Bybee 10 May 2009

I'm not sure how much I agree with it. But It's very well written, I love the part where it says 'You've empowered wolves to Shepard the sheep.' It's very convincing, almost to the point where I do agree with it. That takes a lot of talent. Great job.

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a very well said poem despite if i agree or not with all of what it contain

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