Tuesday, November 23, 2010

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Happiness is a bear claw
at heart -
The thought of someone brings.
Happiness is pretty days
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Gayle M. Citrus Maize Water Nora Shoshone Doherty Winchester, story song Glen A, Sweeney +
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Lynn Glover 07 February 2011

Beautiful, Gayle, and I truly believe that God was with you that day. Thanks for a poem with great flow and rhyming. I love spending time in your poetry. Just a great write. Lynn

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Juan Olivarez 04 December 2010

Wonderful poem Gayle, I had a similiar experiance with a mountain lion. It is in my poem 'Julian' your poem is every bit a ten. God bless. Juan.

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