America Comments

Nice poem. Like the rhythm. But thought a few changes will do some good. 1. Instead of Take Elvis Presley, in the second line, you can say, “I remember Elvis Presley that famous man I never met. Or something different. 2. On 4th line, where you wrote I've only to look in history, should it be to look back in history. My favorite line: When there's gold in the hills and life's so full of thrills and spills. I quite agree with you.