Wednesday, May 19, 2010

America Comments

Rating: 3.0

Her fathers built her up with so much care
Choosing exactly what she would wear
They had big things planned for her
Hoped she would be better
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Brandon Owens
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Amrit Rathi 01 June 2010

I love this poem as it depicts true America, what remains unseen beyond the glamor and promises.Succinctly expressed with pathos and indifference.Voted 9/10. Thanks.

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Brandi Guthrie 19 May 2010

Wow! My sentiment exactly. That was so brilliantly expressed. I love it. And so very true.

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