America Comments

Where does one start with this anti-America screed? Perhaps with the echoes of the beat generation in the lines and rhythms of AMERICA? If there is an original thought in this poem, I missed it by a mile. And to top it off, Bourke says it's good work and relevant! Have you both been out of circulation for the last twenty years or so? Is there nothing to celebrate about America this Independence Day?

hmm a grim picture here indeed and i have to agree unfortunately, you have laid out a much avoided truth, and a great day to speak the truth also! ! just a bonus that its a poem also, good work with an important and relevant message! !