Monday, November 28, 2016

Amen And Goodnight Comments

Rating: 5.0

Run off into the forest night, ..moon so bright.
Hanging low, over the river that glows. Waters
ripple white. In the reflection of the pale moon
light. With a touch of breeze so slight, leaves
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Rebecca Navarre
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Timber Koleden 20 June 2025

I love this poem so much! I truly have enjoyed revisiting it again! This is my favorite poem you have written!

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Timber Koleden 04 June 2025

Thank you for blessing me with this marvelous poem tonight! It encapsulates so much beauty and majesty! Though there is no moon shining where I am you have helped me see it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 December 2018

A fantastic expression has been made on nature, peace and father, the almighty astutely. I quote...Run off into the forest night, ..moon so bright. /Hanging low, over the river that glows./ Waters ripple white...Feel the rush of all I /hope to dream tonight..Thank You Father! /Your assistance in times of plight.Amen And Goodnight! ...... Gorgeous poem.10

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Rebecca Navarre 11 December 2018

Thank you! .. Kumarmani, For such a thoughtful and very beautifully kind reply! .. Your poetry brings ever such beautiful feel, heart, and imagery, to others, that's carried within! .. Their hearts! .. Thank you ever so much! .. God bless! ..

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Susan Williams 29 November 2016

You have talent, Rebecca, a novel and lovely way of writing. Take this line- - moon so bright. Hanging low, over the river that glows- - - that is so perfectly written, you paint the scene with simple direct words that allow the scene to form in the readers' minds without any distraction. That is what a real artist is able to do. You step so gently from nature into prayer- - - - leaves sway gentle, with whispers of grace, that they recite...- - - again you have chosen your words perfectly, they Fit a moonlit night, and the act of praying. I enjoy inner rhyming- -it gives such grace to a poem, doesn't it? A lovely 10

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Rebecca Navarre 30 November 2016

My Goodness! Thank You! Susan, You Are So Very Kind! You Are A Wondrous Amazing Writer Who Paints So Beautifully With Her Pen! ! ! I Always Look Forward To Reading More! ! ! Many Blessings! ! !

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Sarah Mkhonza 28 November 2016

A beautifully written poem. I love your images. Well done

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Rebecca Navarre 28 November 2016

Thank You! So Very Much! Sarah, I Love Reading Your Wonderful Writings! ! ! And Look Forward To Reading More! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! And Goodnight! ! !

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