Wednesday, October 25, 2017

Amen, Amen! Comments

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Amen, amen!
You are whining.
But the monster is still dancing,
Drawing new paths for the fasting,
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Saniya Galeyeva
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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 October 2017

The monster is still dancing doing again with trust the fasting. Beautifully narrated poem this is and excellently drafted. With righteousness we should perform karma for gaining virtue and happiness....10

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Saji G Praleyagiri 25 October 2017

Dear Saniya Ur. concept of life conveyed monster influence inlife. We've more or less similar idea ion life asI enshrined in my poem Monster Never Behind may U. read

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Saniya Galeyeva

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Russia, Orenburg region, Sorochinsk
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