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great and worthy may allah bless u thanks to share.

Short, lucid and a nice poem. Thank You!

I echo what has been said in the previous comments, brief and to the point. Congratulations on making this invocation quiet, perceptive of self and respectful of the divine. I quarrel only with the rhyme dreams screams which goes agaqinst the prevailing tone.

make worthwhile not if im worthy, make worthwhile because im trying, this i enjoyed reading, its well written, meaningful and also personal

I like how it's simple and straight to the point. Some things are better said brief than wreathed with so much blabbery. keep it up