Monday, September 29, 2008

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Rating: 5.0

There's a lovely tropic island at the bottom of the map,
It's a paradise on earth except for one small handicap;
We have wallabies and kangaroos to only name a few,
And a gentler crowd is seldom found in any city's zoo.
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Frank Halliwell
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Tj Becker 24 October 2008

Excellent flow, rhyme and terrific imagery with a touch of humor.. In my opinion Perfect poem. Great write

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Frank Halliwell

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Hamilton Canada
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