Sunday, January 9, 2011

Ambivalent-Afflated-Alliteration Comments

Rating: 5.0

Every step I take is awake
I rest no more -
Every step I take to my wake
Where I rest forever more -
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Smoky Hoss
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Lynn Glover 25 February 2011

Smoky, many truths have been spoken in this poem and my prayer is that folks that read this will heed to the message you have sent. Much truth and a very good write for all to read. Great job, Lynn.

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James Casey 21 February 2011

Dear poet, you have outdone even you with this true masterpiece, I salute you and your work, send more

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Juan Olivarez 14 January 2011

Absolutely great poem with great play of words in all lines, this is a true masterpiece.

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