Friday, May 15, 2009

Ambitious Poem Comments

Rating: 4.8

A poem with an aim,
Destined to make a name
To end up well in fame,
Knows well to play a game.
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Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie
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kulit .. 01 July 2009

your a good poet.. yes, every poetry is ambitious in different ways... i believe one of it's aim is to give life to the world we are in...

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Marieta Maglas 29 June 2009

A realistic poem that reveals, so succinctly, a point of view absolutely realistic...I like your rhymes, dear Obinna..10+++

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Catrina Heart 13 June 2009

The message have been vividly pointed out....well penned in great end rhymes! ! ! ! ! !

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Dana Soumbouloglou 10 June 2009

loved reading it! .. actually all poems of yours are great... nice to read..

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Noha El3wdy 29 May 2009

Knows it a lot to play To get there in a way, To make a mark to stay To have a brightened day wooooooooooooow, you are creative. i liked the idea soo much, i will try to write somthing like this. your choise of words is great. it left its mark in me thanks

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John Kay 26 May 2009

pleased) perfectly written and full of sense... 'A poem with an aim' - indeed so...

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