Ambitious Poem Comments

your a good poet.. yes, every poetry is ambitious in different ways... i believe one of it's aim is to give life to the world we are in...

A realistic poem that reveals, so succinctly, a point of view absolutely realistic...I like your rhymes, dear Obinna..10+++

The message have been vividly pointed out....well penned in great end rhymes! ! ! ! ! !

loved reading it! .. actually all poems of yours are great... nice to read..

Knows it a lot to play To get there in a way, To make a mark to stay To have a brightened day wooooooooooooow, you are creative. i liked the idea soo much, i will try to write somthing like this. your choise of words is great. it left its mark in me thanks

pleased) perfectly written and full of sense... 'A poem with an aim' - indeed so...