A stuttering silence,
and some doubtful words.
a voice,
congruent with the wind’s whisper.
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Great flow of words, establishing an arcane expression. Thrilling.
Wow......Friend your thought process deserves kudos...just loved to glide thru your verse...felt like quoting lines...but then found that I had to quote the whole poem...10++...Brishti...
a wonderful collage of emotions on this vast canvas of life, sarvesh...i'm more and more amazed at your talent as u keep writing! well done, dear young man...
an ambience of sorrow and confusions at the crossjoints ofchanging times.very well written as usual sarvesh!