Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Saturday, November 16, 2019

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A warring tribe of women strong,
according to the tales;
their right breasts they did all cut off,
yet they were strong as males.
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Bri Edwards 19 November 2019

3 - Ha! ! Censors again. line 1 of MY poem is supposed to end in C O C K (put them together, uncapitalized) . lines 3 & 4: D A M N (put them together, uncapitalized) is supposed to come before " way" and before " day" , respectively. respectfully, bri edwards :))))))))))))

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Bri Edwards 19 November 2019

2 – I’ll be damned * if I’d slice off my **, So I could be a better college “jock”***. At sports it might get in my **** way, But it’s not at sports I play all day! *damned related to, Adjective, informal: used for emphasis, especially to express anger or frustration” ** : *** jock: athlete **** see, above Bri :)

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Bri Edwards 19 November 2019

1 - re Poet's Notes: so, how DID you speak to them? ? The language of Love? tact: " adroitness and sensitivity in dealing with others or with difficult issues" adroitness: " cleverness or skill." yes, ok, to MyPoemList. did the left 'go' if one was left handed? ? Ouchy! ! ! Kim’s for tact is compared to “ for tat is an English saying meaning " equivalent retaliation" Nice.

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Kim Barney 19 November 2019

I spoke in Portuguese and they spoke in their native tongue and neither of us understood the other.

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wes vogler 17 November 2019

clever verse lad I cannot however place any credence in the breastremoval.. no way the gal on the right looks somewhat Neanderthal

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Kim Barney 17 November 2019

Thanks for the comment, Wes. You're right. I find that hard to believe, too.

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Kim Barney 13 March 2022

Wes, ol' buddy, I really miss you here on PH. I hope you are still doing well on AP. I will check on you one of these days.

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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