Thursday, September 5, 2019

Amazon: Lungs Of Earth On Fire -Ii Comments

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The forest fires
Rage if Nature so desires—
The nature, ever so discreet,
A way has to limit it.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 September 2019

But not a man-made fire Caused by man's burning desire, A fire that started in man's mind And fueled by greed purblind! ? ? ? ? ? sorry not crystal clear to me as your other poetry A P ji

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 September 2019

You have to read it along with the earlier lines. Forest fires are often natural aimed at renewal. And nature has a way to restrict them, but not such fires cause by man's greed. This is a poem on current happening and you must have been reading on what all did happen and how. I always appreciate such questioning feedback, and must thank you dear PP.

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 September 2019

Please do let me know if you are still not satisfied. Perhaps a comma after the fourth line instead of a full stop would have helped.

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