You hurt me,
Scared me,
Bruised me,
Tried to extinguish me
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The titles my favourite part. Theres nothing wrong with the poem saying that
Your work is totally free of conceit, that gives it true quality.
This poem is incredible! The title itself was capturing and the message, truly powerful. Loved it!
I refuse to be anything Except free from you It's hard to find the strength to be free, but it's possible. Thanks for highlighting that so well.
Natural order resolves many troubles. All, ultimately. A very fine and potent write.
A very powerful poem, sometimes the bad have to die so the good can live. A really good write.
A positive attitude very well expressed - we should never be subdued by those who have treated us badly. Good one Ruby.
Love your strength in this poem. What a title you have chosen. Thanks for sharing your amazing work
A poem with positive attitudes have been impressively delineated. We shouldn't be underbrought by them who have treated us rudely. here I want to quote..... You hurt me, Scared me, Bruised me, /....And I feel that I have won A brutal fight Nice presentation.10