Tuesday, August 28, 2007

'Amazeing Grace' Comments

Rating: 5.0

I watched you there, alone in the park.
As you appeared everyday, many times before dark
Talking to the pigeons, and some imaginary friends
You’d sit all alone for hours on end.
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Barbara Haskell 05 October 2007

This poem is such an excellent read! I had no clue as to where it was going, which was a nice surprise. Great rhyming scheme. kudo's!

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Meggie Gultiano 27 September 2007

A very touching piece..I was in tears reading this..you're great..you write eloquently..i love this work of yours..so great..top marks.. hugs, Meggie

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Brian Mills 05 September 2007

okay...ive read some fantastic writes here....some have truly touched my heart and others that did the same that i could also relate to....this one here has to be the best poem that ive read so far.......i didnt know where it was going until the end.....how 'true love' never dies.....its always there...with or without the other person here on earth.....i feel the same about my 'true love' melissa.......this one hit home buddy.....thnx for sharing! ! ! by the way......a 10 does this one NO justice...buts thats all they'll allow me to give....so here's a 10! ! ! Brian

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Ivor Hogg 02 September 2007

You sir are a raconteur of great ability You wrung my heart stringsI have seen this lady in many different places and guises. Never knowing the full story but recognising the trust that the wild creatures had in her Excellent narrative poetry a favourite genre of mine ivor

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Melvina Germain 30 August 2007

Well the tears are not only welling up in my eyes but falling down my face. This is a most touching, caring poem, it shows how grateful one can be even when faced with poverty. Having a belief and faith in God carries him through day by day and he is grateful to be able to share what little he has with those little creatures, grateful to have another day in which to enjoy God's beauty. This poem is an 'Amazing Grace'. I thank you so much for writing such a treasured beauty and thankyou for taking me to the park so I could see with my own eyes, you defintiely took me there, truly an amazing poem.--Melvina--

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Bonnie Harding 28 August 2007

A beautiful story Poison, And told with such emotion...Very nice

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