Saturday, February 19, 2005

Amateurs Under Pressure1 Comments

Rating: 4.7

Filling my mind with visions and dreams.
Lighting a candle as i yell and scream.
Laughing at loud at the prophets and
kings, they promise mircles and wonders
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DAVID GERARDINO
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R R 19 February 2007

Great Poem David, Love how it's written. It is very unique. Take care.

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A Harrie 25 August 2005

Wonderfully written, the ending is great... standing, blinking, oh yeah.....

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Ritika Mane 06 August 2005

It's true- you can't really see the whole picture till someone puts it into perspective. Good show :)

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