Sunday, February 10, 2013

Am Writing Comments

Rating: 5.0

nose failing
eyes crying
head aching
sleep slipping
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Manonton Dalan
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 17 February 2013

Creative write, it would be best to work on a premise and end with a resolution. Interesting and smooth flow. Better remove the rating box as some people use it inappropriately.

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