Saturday, January 24, 2009

Am Walking Away Comments

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Am not going down that road again
With all the suffering and pain
What more could I do
I gave all I had to you
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Yassar Ali
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Allemagne Roßmann 14 February 2010

Am not going down that road again With all the suffering and pain Walking away will alluviate it....you have to fight it away or dab it off......people will always clap on the end results if good.Otherwise they will add to yours what you call as pain................ Let rain of happiness wash away your stain strained in pain................

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Jodie Pollock 29 January 2010

sorry.. pain is a dreadful gift x

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Lady Grace 13 June 2009

this poem is beautiful, sad to know the heartaches inside but the presentation is nicely done..grace

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Emma Jane Rae 16 April 2009

wow wow wow! i love this poem its got so much emotion well done!

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