Thursday, June 4, 2009

## Am Stuck [senryu] Comments

Rating: 4.1


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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Smiley Hooker 17 June 2009

You're very funny, Sam! Don't you know I'm a friend to the Moon? Say 'hi' for me, okay? very nice! : -)

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Chitra - 15 June 2009

an indelible mark of love on the silver orb

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A senryu with humor! Who is going to unstick you? Maybe the sun will will have to come closer to melt the glue. 10 Karin Anderson

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C. P. Sharma 10 June 2009

Beautifully stuck. CP

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C. P. Sharma 10 June 2009

Beautifully stuck. CP

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Priyanka Bhowmick 10 June 2009

butiful composition of love in a senryu.. lovely 2 read.

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this is good. nice imagination

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 07 June 2009

i could not understand properly.can you explain so that i canenjoy its maeaning?

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Catrina Heart 05 June 2009

fine craft to read..........thanks!

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Seema Chowdhury 05 June 2009

another one...... good work.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 04 June 2009

Missing a dear by a miss, who has to look up for him in the moon, is welll said in a few words.

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Louis Rams 04 June 2009

i looked at the moon, and what did i see good ole sam looking down at me.

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Joseph Poewhit 04 June 2009

That, s one big spotlight

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Sandra Martyres 04 June 2009

Yes Samanyan - you need to wave at all of at PH...nice piece

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Sandra Martyres 04 June 2009

Yes Samanyan - you need to wave at all of at PH...nice piece

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Ashraful Musaddeq 04 June 2009

Wonderful..............10+++

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Carol Gall 04 June 2009

three lines and i like it 10

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Smiley Hooker 04 June 2009

i like this! so cute and funny. i love looking at the moon so don't forget to wave down on me.: -)

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Tara Chettur 04 June 2009

Wow! I don't have any other word for it... Thanks alot for reading my poem.

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