Tuesday, October 6, 2009

# # Am Not Just A Drop [in Top 500] Comments

Rating: 4.5

born from a spring
from mother earth's womb

an adventurous child hood and teen
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Prabir Gayen 14 December 2018

Beautiful and spontaneous poem........

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Indira Renganathan 08 May 2018

This poem has a beautiful flow in wording and meaning like a river and a waterfall....and what a superb ending SL....wonderful- 10++++

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Jeff Pua 08 April 2010

great piece.. I like this..

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Pradyumna Jyotir 11 February 2010

a lovely piece of philosophy put together....

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Andrew Leamon 01 January 2010

I feel at times you fall into cliches and the music of the poem falls and then rises out of nowhere which was definitely unintentional. When I look beyond those things, I think it is pretty good poem and thanks for checking out my poetry.

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Vijay Sai R 01 January 2010

ITS A SHOWER! AND NOT MERELY A DROP..GREAT PIECE

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Pallichadath Balasubramanian 31 December 2009

Very good poem. Liked very much.

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Craig Anderson 21 December 2009

An excellently pieced together piece of prose. Top 500. It's because you are asking people to look at it. Would it not be more polite to vote and make a comment on a persons poem, then they can return the favour. Regards. Craig.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 21 December 2009

thanks for sharing this poem... i can see here that you say it's in the top 500 poems.... well it deserves it!

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Romeo Della Valle 18 December 2009

We are all created to the image of God, therefore, we all are given the wisdom to be creative and show to the entire world what we individually we have become and letting the world be our judge, there is enough proof that you had proven sot, you have excelled, God Bless You, great job, keep it up, it is not an easy job, but at least we are trying, Love and Peace, Romeo, you got my honest vote,10++++

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Sasidharan Vellat Menon 17 December 2009

Thanks for considering my opinion. After seeing your writing, I do not consider me anything near to it. Still I like your style of writing and imagination. You are different. Prodigious! That is all I can say. May we see many more works from u

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Mandara Pookal 20 November 2009

With your ordained exotic philosophy you shall go a long way in your poetic journey and carry the responsibility of showering wisdom on this site and many others with your feel and expression. Best wishes, mandara

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Brendon Carey 07 November 2009

This truly is a great work i hope you keep writing and i will have the pleasure of reading them

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Sakkthi subramaniyam 07 November 2009

Hooray. I am entangled in deep sense of gratitude, which overwhelmed my inner senses. You looked the river in another dimension correlating with real life incidents. Nope I have no words to express my feelings which started to infiltrate in me when I started to read. I can't able to give a rating to this and held this eternal words within a circle of points. May God bless you, to develop and nurture your into a great poet.

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Kamini Arichandran 07 November 2009

Your poem is fantastic...you are very talented!

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Shakuntala Sharma 07 November 2009

beautiful poem.... noble message in it....10+++

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Seema(Aanamika) 80 04 November 2009

very nice poem, beautifully crafted..10+

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Obinna Eruchie 03 November 2009

A beautiful crafted poem!

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Priyanka Bhowmick 03 November 2009

this is something called Excellency in writing.. a brilliant piece... wonderfully scripted.10 for dis..

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Mangla Shanker 01 November 2009

a very wonderfull and imaginative poem.....x

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