born from a spring
from mother earth's womb
an adventurous child hood and teen
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This poem has a beautiful flow in wording and meaning like a river and a waterfall....and what a superb ending SL....wonderful- 10++++
I feel at times you fall into cliches and the music of the poem falls and then rises out of nowhere which was definitely unintentional. When I look beyond those things, I think it is pretty good poem and thanks for checking out my poetry.
An excellently pieced together piece of prose. Top 500. It's because you are asking people to look at it. Would it not be more polite to vote and make a comment on a persons poem, then they can return the favour. Regards. Craig.
thanks for sharing this poem... i can see here that you say it's in the top 500 poems.... well it deserves it!
We are all created to the image of God, therefore, we all are given the wisdom to be creative and show to the entire world what we individually we have become and letting the world be our judge, there is enough proof that you had proven sot, you have excelled, God Bless You, great job, keep it up, it is not an easy job, but at least we are trying, Love and Peace, Romeo, you got my honest vote,10++++
Thanks for considering my opinion. After seeing your writing, I do not consider me anything near to it. Still I like your style of writing and imagination. You are different. Prodigious! That is all I can say. May we see many more works from u
With your ordained exotic philosophy you shall go a long way in your poetic journey and carry the responsibility of showering wisdom on this site and many others with your feel and expression. Best wishes, mandara
This truly is a great work i hope you keep writing and i will have the pleasure of reading them
Hooray. I am entangled in deep sense of gratitude, which overwhelmed my inner senses. You looked the river in another dimension correlating with real life incidents. Nope I have no words to express my feelings which started to infiltrate in me when I started to read. I can't able to give a rating to this and held this eternal words within a circle of points. May God bless you, to develop and nurture your into a great poet.
this is something called Excellency in writing.. a brilliant piece... wonderfully scripted.10 for dis..
Beautiful and spontaneous poem........