Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, March 14, 2010

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Life is on high hope
As to walk on tight rope
Some time on high some times on slope
You never stop never stop never stop
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Chand Shikari 14 July 2010

Life is on high hope As to walk on tight rope.. life is big hope for all....10

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Pradyumna Jyotir 15 March 2010

This is such an optimistic poem...hopeful on every note...exhorting others to go forward. Moving forward.... Alive...alert.... Nothing will tempt you to divert... From doing what you wish to do.. The forward route is the route for you..... Just keep moving forward and keep penning wonderful lines.

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Sahar Sahar 15 March 2010

life in energetic with troughs and crests, we need only hope to survive even we get with disability standing before us as a steep hill

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Leonard Dabydeen 14 March 2010

I find a strong sense of hope in each stanza. The rhyme has an almost bitter-sweet rhythm towards the end. Enjoy this poem. Blessings. Leonard

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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