Monday, August 10, 2009

## Am In Red Comments

Rating: 3.7

[inspired from a mail from MR. SHANMUGHAM CHETTIAR}

am i in green
a smooth sail in car on road
...
Read full text

Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
COMMENTS
Sathyanarayana M V S 22 August 2009

In life we face all colors representing some feeling, some expression. In paining, especially in modern painting, colors are used to denote a particular expression or feeling or even a particular condition of the subject painted. This is a very expressive and colorful poem.

0 0 Reply
Raj Arumugam 21 August 2009

nice play and feel of words and ideas

0 0 Reply
Sandhya S N 20 August 2009

very nice flow of words with a lot of hidden meanings regards sandhya

0 0 Reply
Miriam Maia Padua 16 August 2009

a very nice theme... flows with creative and brilliant ideas very motivating piece...inspiring whatever we've gone through...we should not lose hope... very meaningful, Sam... 10++++ lovelots, Maia

0 0 Reply
Shashendra Amalshan 15 August 2009

You write well indeed dear sam sir! ! ! ! ! ! And you are very creative when it comes to writing poems.... raw talent I should say...... your work always impress me, because I am never being good at being short and concise.. you say a lot in the most creative way.... good 10++ lovess shan

0 0 Reply
Yelena M. 14 August 2009

colourful inspirations.. well-crafted piece, thanks for sharing :) A.

0 0 Reply
Joseph Poewhit 14 August 2009

There always is hope.

0 0 Reply
Ency Bearis 14 August 2009

nice write...a good simile poem...

0 0 Reply
Louis Rams 13 August 2009

life like traffic lights, has times to go, times to slow, and times to stop in your tracks, for there'll be no turning back. good write a ten

0 0 Reply
Ravi A 13 August 2009

'am i stopped in red yes i am and stranded with a feel of dread'- communists can easily misquote these lines and the poet can be in trouble! Similies can land a poet into trouble.

0 0 Reply
Bob Blackwell 12 August 2009

You have explained the stop go of life so very well. From time to time we should all see a orange light, so we can pause and return to now. 10+ Bob

0 0 Reply
Rajaram Ramachandran 11 August 2009

A comparison of day to day life with the three traffic signals is excellent.

0 0 Reply
Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 11 August 2009

the poem came out nicely to be greater than a piece of thought from me. have you read my The concept of the soul? shan

0 0 Reply
Kesav Easwaran 11 August 2009

good poem SLN...there is a good message; a revelation that we recognize at onetime or other in our life journey...thematic...well conveyed...10

0 0 Reply
Carol Gall 10 August 2009

inspirations can make for great writes 10

0 0 Reply
Sandra Martyres 10 August 2009

You have been well inspired Samanyan....good write.

0 0 Reply
~ Jon London ~ 10 August 2009

Nicely done Sam...well composed piece...sharp my man..very sharp

0 0 Reply
Indira Babbellapati 10 August 2009

with the same wry humour unique to SC!

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success