Thursday, February 15, 2007

Am I The Matter? Comments

Rating: 4.6

Why I cannot say it
Why I panic from it
Why I have some difficulty to say it
Is it forbidden to say I love you him
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khadija shaker
COMMENTS
(De Va) 17 November 2011

beautifully portrayed the loss of love........blessings

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James Mclain 13 October 2009

is it possible.. he feels this way.. and one action.. may let him know... ..iip

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Dr.subhendu Kar 28 May 2009

There's no different among me and him ………lost each other ……… In the 'heaven ' the beautiful place for the meeting..............yet there seems black shadow on rune of love, beautiful write yet ingenious ingenious,10++, thanks for sharing

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 15 May 2009

Would u mind if someone call u the matter..........................lol..............A Good Write....

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Muhammad Ali 25 March 2009

Nice poem friend,10710 on your honest work I hope we will read many more poems by you

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Vinod Kumar 15 December 2008

Good Work, Touching..., Deepest belief is always saved us, Thanks for sharing the wonderful experience.

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Very spiritual perspective.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 August 2008

Shared with ur universal feeling of mankind.

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Aaron Tate 27 January 2008

Got me thinking deeper than the grand canyon. good write. :)

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Tobi Awodunmila 07 August 2007

dont worry although time is what we dont have, while the love last take hold of it. and put sentiments behind you. lovely poem

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Soul Writer 20 July 2007

Only if every1 thought like you Khadija. Well written :) SOUL

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Michael Saurer 28 March 2007

Nothing more to say than: Well done....

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GG Murray 09 March 2007

a very beautiful poem

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*Mandy * 25 February 2007

I agree. Wonderful writing! ♥ Mandy

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Haider Rana 23 February 2007

sensual but beautifully, tastefully, lovingly penned...!

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