I hear about your troubles.
You tell me everyday.
You say you're going under.
I'm not sure what to say.
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How well you describe that fine line that we walk between wanting to be there for our loved ones, both wanting to do too much and trying not to do everything and not knowing which to do. As usual, you hit the nail right on the head.
If we are there for someone and really love them with an open heart.(Unconditionally) . Then we offer them everything that they need.But maybe not everything that they want. Choices, choices, which ones to make. Having to learn answer sometimes along the way. Your A Star! Sometimes even when we don't realise it.We can be shining at our greatest. Love Duncan
you used good word usage to convey your feelings. this sounds like me and my feelings with my friends. love it 4 stars.
Outstanding poem Mary :) Your poem paints a picture with words. Take care.
Very well done, Mary. And I like your philosophy, too. Raynette
From the heart and very well expressed - another good one. avr
Excellent poem, Mary. Please add a 'd' to suppose... Thanks H
I liked this a lot. It reminds me of speaking to my almost 15 year old. Good poem!
Mary, it's cool to have you back. This is a cool poem, just like the rest of your poems.
Great to read you again, Mary, and with your mother's heart you will always figure out what to do!
I've come to you via The Doc's Earth Angels - and I am glad I did... I imagine that you also must be a big doer of ARK works.... now that's helpful! ! ! Thank you