Am I Polluted Comments

An interesting piece; however, it's unclear as to whom the questions are being posed - and that vagueness is what troubles me. While it is obvious to you, there's not enough context to draw the proper viewpoint. Is it God, a spouse, a family member, employer or even all of the aforementioned. One suggestion is to insert the word next into the last line and have it read: for the NEXT test -Joe Breunig, Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory