Am I Nothing? Baby Birthing Rhyming In Ing Comments

The experience comes through loud and clear, as any mom can tell you. Well expressed. Read mine - Bloom of Youth - Adeline

Like your take on. Orthodox - I have written both a poem and a story on this entitled Becoming, which you may like to read.

I wasn't prepared to be impressed when I began reading. Ing words are somewhat frowned upon in modern verse. But as I read I more drawn in, and I quite enjoyed this description of the birth process as it gestated.