Mind wanders all around,
It never needs a ground;
Its nature defies control,
It’s used to rock and roll.
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your mind must be like a merry go round going round and round but d stay sound
i liked this one...asks questions and makes you think...regards
A delightful poem. I do enjoy poems that make the reader think. Am I my mind or is my mind me, Or has it a seperate identity? Perhaps a device not part of man or soul, A font of knowledge to make me whole. Irene
A somewhat belated reply C.P Indeed I am not my mind nor is my mind me. I think we are all a great deal more than we realise.We progress hopeful; y from life to life until we achieve sufficient merit.What happens next I dare not even guess
A deep duality where philosophical poems come and emerge from.10.
Your mind is flying like a multi-colored kite in the sky as if we can see that from far distance. Idea of separating the mind from the body is marvelous. I amazed at the poetic value of this piece, cheers,10+++
so, when a human being dies is it the invincible mind that dies or the spirit or what? i am searching....wonderful poem Sir its like the Gita of my Lord Krishna....wonderful
so, when a human being dies is it the invincible mind that dies or the spirit or what? i am searching....wonderful poem Sir its like the Gita of my Lord Krishna....wonderful
I realy can say wow! b/c ive never read something that inspired me and to me made no since I loved it and could you tell me what it means I would love to know but keep wrighting I liked it a lot! !
we identify with our mind, which just takes us on a roller coaster ride. by its very nature it defies control. going inwards to discover our true nature is the eternal quest. a deeply spiritual poem, though written in a lighter vein. Mamta
however much we may talk of mind, it's just an allusive phenomena...what we knw of is our brain in it's physical form. mind? as vast as the sky and as unreachable and unfathomable!
Mind is the helper, Mind is the destroyer, Wise know this eternal truth So they conquer the mind resltless and brute Good write, Sharmaji
you are what you are...he is what he is..both of you are great and brilliant poets sir........with great writes and your poems shows that you're always in fertile ground to be always in merry go round.... ..reading your works make us also always in fertile ground.....10++++++
wonderful, a perfect compostition from a perfect poet for a perfect fellow poet
being a reader to this poem i learned one of the dimensions of poem writing rgds
the mind is free like a kite and the conscious is the string that keeps you grounded. yes anything is possible if you can truly cut the string!