Am I Mistake Comments

valid existential question, i feel you you know you are not a mistake. Mamta

whoo another great poem of you its a bit sad and i loved it grrrrrreeeeaaaat job on this one and btw you are not a mistake

Well my friend ya not a 'mistake' coz ppl say and can't make ya a mistake. percieve the world as ya feel more imporantly ya perception of ya-self, so never let anyone to think that ya a mistake! ...Winnie with love

A little bit of editing can make it a wonderful lyric. CP