Thursday, May 14, 2009

Am I In Love Again? May Be Or May Be Not Comments

Rating: 2.9

I can't see criss-cross crust of market-cooked pie
Without imagining hands held and once again wondering why.
Shivering in excitement,
I buy the pie and more
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Mahfooz Ali
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Kavya Manjusha 18 August 2009

OHHHH AAHHHHH LA LA LA LA.... hummmm Well after reading your poem trying to sing alound.... Listen, its a beautiful poem with real emotion for the situation (aisa kya? ? ?) but....please control yourself I would not want you to EXPLODE... hihihihi baki agar aisan hai maharaj to.....dil se dua dewat hain ji...

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Marieta Maglas 18 July 2009

''Sighing hard as I head home Sighing so hard my collar bone cracks as if I might explode.''' nice lyric poem, deeply penned with interesting ideas...10+ from me

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Anjali Sinha 23 May 2009

nice poem you maybe or u may not be wonderful thoughts a tenner from me anjuuuuuuuuu

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Mahfooz Ali

Mahfooz Ali

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