Sunday, February 2, 2014

Am I In Love? Comments

Rating: 5.0

How can I control this pace?
My heart is always at race
You can never know the truth
Even if you stare at my face
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Soumita Sarkar
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Kishore Kumar Das 11 May 2016

yes, you are in love...love is a feeling only...the tight hug may not be there......but how does it matter? nice summary by you....10 marks for discovering the common syndrome..

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Sarojkanta Dash 12 April 2015

Soumita, despite aversion, as an expression, is just unbecoming of a love poem. Do you really mean it? You could have said- despite myself...Anyway, I enjoyed the 'strange pain' rhythmically recorded in the lines. Wish you all the best

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Suman Kumar Das 28 February 2014

A distinctive style of ink with full of emotion...............loving lines............Dear!

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Ramesh Rai 15 February 2014

Good rhyming. love can not be stopped.

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Soumita Sarkar 02 February 2014

Thank you Gajanan Sir and Geetha Ma'am...........for your encouraging words....

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 February 2014

Lovely poem. Beautiful flow of words answering the question....Am I in love? Loved reading it.

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Gajanan Mishra 02 February 2014

I am in love, good writing, thanks.

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